DNF at 59%. I tried to make it to the sex scenes, but I just can't do it.
A dozen beta readers and a decent content editor might have saved this book. Editors: they're not just for catching typos, people. And just because you self-pub doesn't mean you get to skip steps. Want to sell your book? Pay for a fucking editor.
No need to write a full review. It's all in the status updates and comments.